Red Asphalt by Craig Faustus Buck

His face hit the pavement hard.  He tried to remember what just happened, but his thoughts wouldn’t sync.  The pain in his head felt like he’d been whacked by the claw end of a hammer, only he remembered a loud blast.  Maybe a gunshot.  Blood was pooling on the ground by his eye.  He watched the pool expand.  He closed his eyes against a stab of afternoon sun reflecting off the crimson expanse.  Blood must be his.  Bad sign.

A relentless pounding in his head accelerated like the sound of a train starting up from a dead stop.  The insides of his eyelids darkened.  He opened his eyes.  There was no more sunlight stabbing off the glossy surface of his seepage.  Someone was blocking the sun, standing in his blood.  He saw steel-toed work boots but didn’t have the strength to lift his eyes to see who wore them.  He waited for his life to flash before him but all he saw were the boots in the slow-flowing blood.  The world was running in slo-mo.  If this was death, it was taking its fucking time.

Then something new moved into his line of sight.  A dog.  A brindle chihuahua.  It occurred to him that the dog seemed familiar.  Then he realized it was his but he couldn’t remember her name.  He watched her wade through the ooze near the boots and start lapping up his blood like she was in doggy heaven.  Lapping up his life’s blood.  Lapping up his life.  Bitch.

10 thoughts on “Red Asphalt by Craig Faustus Buck”

  1. Ha. I could totally see my dog Stella (long-hair chihuahua) lapping up my blood as I lay dying.

  2. Oh yeah. My cats would be all over me like a Christmas dinner.

    I think the chihuahua did it.

  3. There is a lesson here. If your life is in danger, a chihuahua won’t cut it for security. Loved the story, Craig.     

  4. And that is how one uses a most unreliable narrator to create a very memorable scene. Life don’t need a reason or an explanation. It just is. Hoipe the dog gets close enough for the guy to bite it’s head off before the lights go out. Cool.

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